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2014年2月13日,李堅(jiān)柔頂替受傷的王濛參加索契冬奧會(huì)短道速滑女子500米比賽，決賽中,她抓住了三個(gè)對(duì)手一起摔倒的機(jī)會(huì)穩(wěn)扎穩(wěn)打成功摘金獲得冠軍。成為繼大楊揚(yáng)之后，史上第四位獲女子500米世錦賽冠軍的中國選手。王濛說：“也許是堅(jiān)持帶來幸運(yùn),這不能說為僥幸，雖有運(yùn)氣成分，但李堅(jiān)柔付出了真正的努力，同時(shí)心態(tài)穩(wěn)定，各種因素之下，才奪得冠軍”。請(qǐng)以Chance and Success為話題寫一篇英語作文。
要求：1. 可適當(dāng)添加符合實(shí)際的內(nèi)容，語句通順，意思連貫;
2. 詞數(shù)不少于80詞;
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Chance and Success
To our great joy, Li Jianrou won the first prize in the Women's 500m Speed Skating on February 13th,2014. She is a lucky dog. As you know, chance is one of the most important parts of success. But chances don't come often. And not all the chances can certainly lead to success. What’s more, chances and hard work are usually twins; most people don't know them. So if you want to achieve something, you must make efforts and get prepared. Or you will take no advantage of chances when they come to you. In my opinion, there are plenty of chances for everyone in our society, but only those who have made enough preparations and are highly talented can make use of them to achieve their purpose. Li Jianrou did so. Don’t you think so?

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，所以在寫作時(shí)，要尤其注意一般過去時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。根據(jù)提示，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語, to one’s great joy, win the first prize, the Women's 500m Speed Skating, make efforts and get prepared, but only those who have made enough preparations and are highly talented can make use of them to achieve their purpose.寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)運(yùn)用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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