Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

“平安出行，文明騎車”已成為人們普遍關(guān)心的一個社會熱門話題，特別作為一名中學(xué)生，騎自行車時如何保持安全是非常重要的。請你根據(jù)圖表中所提示的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇短文。

注意：1.短文的開頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)；

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；

3．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，并表達(dá)你個人的看法；

4．詞數(shù)90左右。

How can we keep safe when we ride?____________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

How can we keep safe when we ride? First, we must obey the traffic rules, especially when we cross the road. When the traffic light is red, we must stop. Second, we must wear helmets and have lights on the bicycle when we ride a bike. Third, we shouldn’t ride so fast while riding a bike. Though bicycles are much safer than any other vehicle, sometimes bicycle accidents also happen, so we must be careful. Remember “It’s very important for us to keep safe when we ride.” I hope more and more people can choose to go out by bicycle. It’s not only good for the environment, but also for our own health.

【解析】

試題分析：“平安出行，文明騎車”已成為人們普遍關(guān)心的一個社會熱門話題。寫前考生要認(rèn)真審題，中學(xué)生如何安全騎車是寫作的主題。根據(jù)圖表中所提示的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可知這里應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時來描述，主語用第一人稱，要注意上下文之間的銜接。內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，并表達(dá)個人的看法。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文按照寫作要求，根據(jù)漢語提示，用簡潔的語言，準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出漢語意思，語言流暢。本文寫作思路清晰，時態(tài)運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，特別First, Second, Third,的使用，使語意更加連貫，層次分明。并依據(jù)要求，提出了自己的希望：I hope more and more people can choose to go out by bicycle. It’s not only good for the environment, but also for our own health. 倡導(dǎo)平安出行，文明騎車