Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是李華，你的好朋友Lisa不久前參加達人秀節(jié)目被淘汰了, 她為這次失敗所困擾，無心學習。請你給她寫一封電子郵件，建議她正確地看待達人秀節(jié)目，享受參與的過程而不必太在意結(jié)果；提醒她實現(xiàn)理想的途徑有很多，只有努力才能獲得成功；鼓勵她好好學習，也不放棄個人愛好，開心地度過每一天。

要求：（1）包含以上所有要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

（2）字數(shù)：60 — 80詞（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；

（3）信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名、學校名和地名。

From: lihua3456.@sina.com

To: lisa68@sohu.com

Subject: To think about talent shows in a proper way

Dear Lisa， I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show. Hope you'll be happy every day. Yours， Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lisa,

I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show. As your friend, I have something to say about the whole thing.

Yes, talent show may change someone's future. These shows offer great opportunities to people to realize their dreams. However, we can't deny the fact that only a few of them are extraordinarily talented, so there is no need to take the result too seriously. It is not always necessarily a good thing for teenagers to be famous overnight. So just enjoy the process of getting involved.

Although there are many ways to be successful, only by working hard can achieve your goals. You should spare no efforts to study and develop your interest at the same time. There is no doubt that they will enrich your future life.

Hope you'll be happy every day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

題干解讀：這是一篇書信作文。要求根據(jù)Lisa參加達人秀被淘汰這件事和提示的內(nèi)容完成作文。寫作時要注意語句通順，語意連貫，緊扣要點，注意句子之間的連接與過渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。