Question

日常生活中，中學(xué)生應(yīng)當(dāng)具有基本的自我保護(hù)能力。為了進(jìn)一步增強(qiáng)中學(xué)生的安全意識，提高學(xué)習(xí)生活自我保護(hù)能力，某校開展了以“安全”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以上目的和以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇演講稿。標(biāo)題是：How to keep safe.
注意：1）內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2）表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范，130詞左右。

Answer 1

As teenagers, we should always keep safe in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least. Summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first!

試題分析：本題目要求學(xué)生以安全為話題寫一篇演講稿。所給要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)。在寫作前，可以先翻譯這些要點(diǎn)，然后再考慮將這些要點(diǎn)有條理的組合在一起，構(gòu)成篇章，當(dāng)然在寫作中我們也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但所給要點(diǎn)一個也不能少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文使用了一些表示順序的詞如first，second等，使得文章顯得很條理。還是用了一些副詞如especially、also等及句型so that，這些都為文章增色不少。