Question

3．假設(shè)你是大一學(xué)生李玲，暑假想找份工作．你對上述廣告很感興趣．請根據(jù)招聘廣告以及以下所提供的個(gè)人信息，寫一份應(yīng)聘信．
寫作要求：
1．必須包括以下信息：
李玲，20歲，肇慶學(xué)院中文系學(xué)生．喜歡孩子，有耐心；擅長英語，愛好唱歌、跳舞．
經(jīng)歷：曾在老人院（the Old House）兼職，做過中文家教．
2．字?jǐn)?shù)：60---80．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
Dear sir （ madam），
I'm Liling，20．I'm studying Chinese in Zhaoqing College．I can speak verygood Putonghua．I saw your advertisement yesterday and I am quite interested in the job．
As a college student，I have many hobbies．I am good at singing and dancing．My English is excellent．I taught an American child English and did very well．I am very patient as well．I took care of the old in the Old House as a part-time job．
I hope I can get the job and I'll try my best to do it well．You can call me at 2788955．
Thank you．
Yours，
Liling．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I took care of the old in the Old House as a part-time job我在敬老院做兼職照顧老人．
take care of 照顧
【高分句型二】
I hope I can get the job and I'll try my best to do it well．我希望我能得到這份工作，我會(huì)盡力去做好．
①hope 后是省略了that的賓語從句．
②try one's best to do sth 盡力去做某事．

解答 Dear sir （ madam），
    I'm Liling，20．I'm studying Chinese in Zhaoqing College．（個(gè)人信息）I can speak  Putonghua very well．I saw your advertisement yesterday and I am quite interested in the job．
   As a college student，I have many hobbies．I am good at singing and dancing．My English is excellent．（喜歡孩子，有耐心；擅長英語，愛好唱歌、跳舞．）I taught an American child English and did very well．I am very patient as well．I took care of the old in the Old House as a part-time job．【高分句型一】（經(jīng)歷）
I hope I can get the job and I'll try my best to do it well．【高分句型二】You can call me at 2788955．
Thank you．
Yours，
 Liling

點(diǎn)評 要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性．寫作時(shí)，要注意謂語動(dòng)詞形式的變化．另外，還需要使用一些句型和短語，使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．