Question

2．你校英語社團正在開展主題為"What should a good teacher be like？"的討論，為此你來訪了一些學生和家長，請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文進行交流，并闡述你的觀點．

Students'opinions	Parents'opinions	Your opinion
get on well with students give active and lively classes	have plenty of knowledge be strict with students	…

注意：（1）文章必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；
（2）你的觀點至少兩條，不能重復表中觀點；
（3）詞數(shù)：80-100；
（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)．
短文首句：Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like．
               What should a good teacher be like？
As for students，they think a good teacher should get along well with their students．And they are supposed to try to make their classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest．Different from students，parents think it's very important for a good teacher to have plenty of knowledge．What's more，teachers should be strict with their students．
In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those who have difficulties in learning．Anyway，they are expected to help their students learn how to learn well．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是闡述What should a good teacher be like的討論結(jié)果，以及自己的觀點．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．學生的觀點：和學生相處的好，積極生動的課堂
2．家長的觀點：知識淵博，對學生嚴格
3．我的觀點（至少兩條）
常用到的重點短語：
go along with sb：與某人相處
be supposed to  應該
make…adj  讓…怎樣
what's more 再者
be strict with sb：對某人嚴格
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．And they①are supposed to ②try to ③make their classes lively and active④so that students can learn better with great interest．
①be supposed to  應該，后加動詞原形．
②try to do sth 盡力做某事
③make…adj  讓…怎樣，make的用法．
④so that引導的目的狀語從句．
2．①In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those ②who ③have difficulties in learning．
①in one's opinion：依某人看來，作為插入語．
②who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾前面的先行詞those．
③have difficulties in doing sth：做某事有困難．
3．①Anyway，they ②are expected to③help their students learn ④how to learn well．
①anyway"無論如何"，常放句首．
②一般現(xiàn)在時的被動語態(tài)am/is/are+過去分詞，主語they是expect的承受者，構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系，故用被動語態(tài)．
③help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
④疑問詞+to do 作為learn的賓語．

解答 What should a good teacher be like？Students and parents have different opinions about what a good teacher should be like．
As for students，they think a good teacher should get along well with their students．And they are supposed to try to make their classes lively and active so that students can learn better with great interest．【高分句型】（學生的觀點：和學生相處的好，積極生動的課堂）Different from students，parents think it's very important for a good teacher to have plenty of knowledge．What's more，teachers should be strict with their students．（家長的觀點：知識淵博，對學生嚴格）
In my opinion，the most important thing for a good teacher is to trust and encourage students，especially those who have difficulties in learning．【高分句型】Anyway，they are expected to help their students learn how to learn well．【高分句型】（我的觀點）

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