Question

【題目】假如你是王寧，你的英國(guó)筆友Linda想了懈你的周末生活。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示，給Linda寫一封電子郵件，告訴她你是如何度過上個(gè)周末的。內(nèi)容提示：

1.上周六上午，你和父母一起騎自行車去了一家草莓采摘觀光園；

2.聽采摘觀光園主人講述自己的人生故事：16歲時(shí)一場(chǎng)車禍奪去了她的雙腿，在

政府和家人的幫助下創(chuàng)建草莓采摘觀光園，每年收入近百萬元，吸引大量游客：

3.和采摘觀光園主人合影，在采摘觀光園餐館就餐；

4.你的感受。

要求：

1．語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)句通順，內(nèi)容充實(shí)；

2．字?jǐn)?shù)：不少于100詞；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

可能用到的詞匯：Picking and Sightseeing Garden采摘觀光園；strawberry草莓；

government地方政府；attract吸引；tourist游客

Dear Linda,

Thanks for your last email. ____________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

Wang Ning

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Linda，

Thanks for your last email．

Last Saturday morning， I went to a strawberry Picking and Sightseeing Garden with my parents． We rode bikes there because it was not far from my home． We listened to the story of the owner of the Picking and Sightseeing Garden． At the age of 16， he lost both of his legs because of a car accident． With the help of the government and her family， she set up the Picking and Sightseeing Garden．The annual income is close to one million yuan and it attracts a large number of tourists．

We also took photos with the owner and had lunch at the Picking and Sightseeing Garden．

It was a great weekend and I had a wonderful time．

Yours

Wang Ning

【解析】

亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如thank for，last Saturday morning，ride bikes，far from，listen to，at the age of 16，because of，with the help of，set up，be close to，a large number of，have a wonderful time等。而We rode bikes to there because it was not far from my home/ At the age of 16，he lost both of his legs because of a car accident.兩種因果關(guān)系句式結(jié)構(gòu)的綜合運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。