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7．許多同學(xué)對(duì)如何適應(yīng)即將來(lái)臨的高中生活進(jìn)行了討論，請(qǐng)參考以下信息，寫一篇80-100詞的英語(yǔ)短文與同學(xué)們分享．
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規(guī)劃學(xué)習(xí)	制定計(jì)劃，自主學(xué)習(xí)
積極交流	參與小組討論，表達(dá)想法，多與老師、同學(xué)交流
參加活動(dòng)	積極參加各項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、唱歌比賽）
你的想法	…

參考詞匯：小組討論group discussion 自主學(xué)習(xí)者independent learner
Facing the coming of the high school life，how can we get used to it as soon as possible？
In many students'opinion，we should plan our study well and learn to be independent learners．What's more，it's better for us to join group discussions and exchange our ideas with our teachers and classmates as well．Besides，we need to take part in all kinds of activities，like sports meetings，singing competitions，etc．，which can make our life colorful．
In my view，we should get on well with others．So don't forget to say hello when meeting them and do them a favor when they are in need of help．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勅绾芜m應(yīng)即將來(lái)臨的高中生活．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1 規(guī)劃學(xué)習(xí)：制定計(jì)劃，自主學(xué)習(xí)
2 積極交流：參與小組討論，表達(dá)想法，多與老師、同學(xué)交流
3 參加活動(dòng)：積極參加各項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)、唱歌比賽）
4 你的看法
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
what's more 再者
take part in 參加
get on well with sb 與某人相處的好
forget to do sth 忘了去做某事
do sb a favor 幫助某人
【高分句型】
1①．What's more，②it's better for us to join group discussions and③exchange our ideas with our teachers and classmates④as well．
①what's more 再者
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
③exchage…with sb與某人交換…
④as well 也，放在句末
2．①Besides，we ②need to ③take part in all kinds of activities，④like sports meetings，singing competitions，etc．，⑤which can⑥make our life colorful
①besides 另外
②need to do sth 需要做某事
③take part in 參加
④like 比如，例如
⑤which作為關(guān)系詞，引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾前面整個(gè)句子．
⑤make sth+adj 讓某物怎么樣的

解答 Facing the coming of the high school life，how can we get used to it as soon as possible？
In many students'opinion，we should plan our study well and learn to be independent learners．（規(guī)劃學(xué)習(xí)）What's more，it's better for us to join group discussions and exchange our ideas with our teachers and classmates as well．（積極交流）【高分句型】Besides，we need to take part in all kinds of activities，like sports meetings，singing competitions，etc．，which can make our life colorful．（參加活動(dòng)）【高分句型】
In my view，we should get on well with others．So don't forget to say hello when meeting them and do them a favor when they are in need of help．（你的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．