Question

假設(shè)你叫李玲，你在英國(guó)的筆友Nancy對(duì)中國(guó)的節(jié)日懷有濃厚的興趣，她希望你能幫助她更多地了解這方面的知識(shí)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給的提示詞匯給她寫(xiě)一封60—70 詞左右的信，向她介紹中國(guó)最重要的節(jié)日 —— 春節(jié)。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
提示詞：Chunlian 春聯(lián)   relatives and friends 親朋好友    set off firecrackers 放鞭炮    dragon and lion dances 舞龍獅   
Dear Nancy,
How’s everything going with you?
You want to learn more about Chinese festivals, right? I’d like to tell you something about the most important Chinese festival — Spring Festival.
Do you think this festival is interesting? Welcome to China to spend Spring Festival with us.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ling

Answer 1

Dear Nancy,
How’s everything going with you?
You want to learn more about Chinese festivals, right? I’d like to tell you something about the most important Chinese festival — Spring Festival. It usually comes in January or February. About two weeks before the festival, people begin to be busy preparing for it. We usually clean the house, go shopping and put up “Chunlian” on doors. On the Spring Festival’s Eve, we usually have a big dinner with our families. At that time, all the family members are getting together. The holiday for Spring Festival usually lasts for fifteen days. During that time, we set off firecrackers, visit our relatives and friends, watch dragon and lion dances and so on.
Do you think this festival is interesting? Welcome to China to spend Spring Festival with us.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ling

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封信介紹中國(guó)的春節(jié)。給出的材料比較簡(jiǎn)略，故動(dòng)筆前先要根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定要寫(xiě)內(nèi)容，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂語(yǔ)之間的一致問(wèn)題，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)是第一人稱(chēng)較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。