Question

5．請(qǐng)以MyDream為題寫一篇80詞左右的作文
內(nèi)容包括：1．你的夢(mèng)想是什么？2．為什么會(huì)有這樣的夢(mèng)想？（至少1個(gè)理由）
3．你有什么優(yōu)點(diǎn)或愛好？（至少l點(diǎn)4．為了實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想，你覺得自己目前需要做什么？（至少l點(diǎn)）注意：短文應(yīng)包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不分先后，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；
My dream
I think everyone should have a dream．A dream can push you ahead．
My dream is to become a tourist guide．Why do 1 want to be a guide？First，I like travelling．If l become a guide，I can travel all around the world．Second，I like making friends．If I work as a guide，I can make lots of friends．
I know it's not easy to be a good guide．So from now on I'll spend more time doing all kinds of reading．Besides，I'll learn how to think for others．
There is a saying"Where there is a will，there is a way，"I am sure my dream will come true one day if I work hard．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
If I become a guide，I can travel all around the world．如果我成為一名導(dǎo)游，我能環(huán)游世界．if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
There is a saying"Where there is a will，there is a way"有句諺語(yǔ)：有志者事竟成．
Where there is a will，there is a way有志者事竟成．諺語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用．

解答 My dream
I think everyone should have a dream．A dream can push you ahead．
My dream is to become a tourist guide（你的夢(mèng)想是什么）．Why do I want to be a guide？First，I like travelling．If I become a guide，I can travel all around the world．【高分句型一】Second，I like making friends．If I work as a guide，I can make lots of friends．（為什么以及優(yōu)點(diǎn)或愛好）
I know it's not easy to be a good guide．So from now on I'll spend more time doing all kinds of reading．Besides，I'll learn how to think for others．（目前需要做什么）
There is a saying"Where there is a will，there is a way，"【高分句型二】I am sure my dream will come true one day if I work hard．

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