Question

【題目】2016年江蘇省初中英語(yǔ)聽(tīng)力口語(yǔ)自動(dòng)化考試已經(jīng)結(jié)束。假定你是初三學(xué)生Daniel, 你們學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)邀請(qǐng)你向全校同學(xué)進(jìn)行經(jīng)驗(yàn)介紹。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提綱準(zhǔn)備一份英文發(fā)言稿：

1. 你是如何準(zhǔn)備本次考試的；

2. 你從中獲得怎樣的收獲與感受；

3. 你對(duì)提高英語(yǔ)聽(tīng)說(shuō)能力的建議。

注意：1. 發(fā)言稿中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；

2. 語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；

3. 詞數(shù)80左右，發(fā)言稿的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone! I’m Daniel. It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions. The listening and speaking test has been over.

Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】

Good morning, everyone! I’m Daniel. It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions. The listening and speaking test has been over. In order to get a good result, I focused on every English lesson. After class, I read and recited those topics carefully according to our English teacher’s demand. Also, I did listening exercises almost every day.

To my surprise, I’m not afraid of speaking English before others any more. What’s more, I am better at listening and speaking. Although I feel tired, I am very happy and become more confident.

Here is my advice on how to improve them. First of all, take an active part in class activities. Watch more English films if possible. Moreover, it’s a good way to improve your ability by learning English songs.

Thank you for listening!

【解析】

試題分析：本文內(nèi)容要求你寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。本文應(yīng)以第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)敘事為主。靈活采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如: in order to，according to, to my surprise, be afraid of, be better at等；after class ,also,what’s more, although, moreover等詞的恰當(dāng)使用, 使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性、更富有條理。