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10．為配合創(chuàng)建"綠色健康校園"工作，學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)起以"Make Our School Greener"為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇短文，短文題目和開頭已給出．
要點(diǎn)提示：
1．愛護(hù)校園內(nèi)的花草樹木
2．保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物
3．節(jié)約用水、堅(jiān)持鍛煉…
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右；開頭已給出‘不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
2．結(jié)合以上要點(diǎn)，可圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Make Our School Greener
In order to make our school greener，I think we shoulddo many things，which can be listed as follows．
First of all，never destroy the flowers and trees in our school．Besides，we should keep the school environment neat and clean，thus throwing away the waste should be forbidden．Meanwhile，try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the classroom is empty．What's more，regular exercise can help us stay healthy and build up our body．We should also be polite to others，and try our best to get on well with each other．In short，whatever you do，please remember to lead a green and healthy life．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是為配合你校創(chuàng)建"綠色健康學(xué)校"工作的全面展開，校學(xué)生會(huì)發(fā)起以"Make Our School Greener"為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一，二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
（1）愛護(hù)校園內(nèi)的花草樹木（2）保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物（3）節(jié)約用水，堅(jiān)持鍛煉
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
keep sth+adj 保持某物怎么樣的
throw away 亂扔
meanwhile 同時(shí)
try to do sth 盡力做某事
forget to do sth 忘記去做某事
turn off 關(guān)掉
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
be polite to sb 對(duì)某人禮貌
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．①Besides，we should②keep the school environment neat and clean，③thus ④throwing away the waste ⑤should be forbidden．
①besides 另外
②keep sth+adj 保持某物怎么樣的
③thus 因此，表結(jié)果
④throw away 亂扔．動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)．
⑤情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)：情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+過(guò)去分詞．
2．①M(fèi)eanwhile，②try to save water③if necessary and never ④forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or ⑤when the classroom is empty．
①meanwhile 同時(shí)
②try to do sth 盡力做某事
③if necessary是省略句，完整表達(dá)是if it is necessary．
④forget to do sth 忘記去做某事  turn off 關(guān)掉
⑤when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
3．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，遵循主將從現(xiàn)的規(guī)則．

解答 Make Our School Greener
In order to make our school greener，I think we  should do many things，which can be listed as follows．
First of all，never destroy the flowers and trees in our school．（愛護(hù)校園內(nèi)的花草樹木）Besides，we should keep the school environment neat and clean，thus throwing away the waste should be forbidden．【高分句型】（保持校園整潔，不亂扔廢棄物）Meanwhile，try to save water if necessary and never forget to turn off the lights in the daytime or when the classroom is empty．【高分句型】（節(jié)約用水，離開教室前記得關(guān)燈）
What's more，regular exercise can help us stay healthy and build up our body．（堅(jiān)持鍛煉，增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)）We should also be polite to others，and try our best to get on well with each other．（禮貌待人，同學(xué)間相處融洽）
In short，whatever you do，please remember to lead a green and healthy life．If you understand it，you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it．【高分句型】（總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，寫作時(shí)要注意文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)還要注意句式的正確運(yùn)用，例如祈使句和情態(tài)動(dòng)詞就是本篇作文的關(guān)鍵．寫作時(shí)，要注意句式的變化使用．