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假如你班要就“如何為中考作準(zhǔn)備”開(kāi)一個(gè)主題班會(huì)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)中考準(zhǔn)備過(guò)程中要注意的事項(xiàng)以及建議理由：
1. 保持良好情緒。不要焦慮和緊張，否則會(huì)沒(méi)有面對(duì)困難的勇氣。
2. 制定合適的目標(biāo)，太低的目標(biāo)使人懶散，太高的目標(biāo)使人失去信心。
3. 不要熬夜，以確保上課時(shí)精力旺盛，注意力集中。
4. 多與父母、老師、同學(xué)交流溝通，以便幫忙走出困境。  
5. 談?wù)勀阕约旱囊恢羶蓚�(gè)觀點(diǎn)。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)90左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文通順連貫；
3. 參考詞匯：目標(biāo) aim  v./ n. 信心confidence  n.
Boys and girls, the final exams are coming. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams? Here are some suggestions.
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With these done, I believe________________________________________________

Answer 1

Boys and girls, the final exams are coming. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams? Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, it’s very important for us to be in good moods. Don’t be nervous or stressed. Otherwise, we will not have the courage to face difficulties. Secondly, we should have aims. If we aim too low, we may become lazy. If we aim too high, we may lose confidence. Thirdly, don’t stay up late so that we can make ourselves energetic in class and pay attention to our study. Fourthly, we’d better have more communication with our parents, teachers and classmates. They can help us get out trouble. Finally, a healthy diet is very useful as well.
With these done, I believe we can be successful in the exams.

試題分析：這是篇命題作文。題目中給出了寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，在作文里一定要包含這些要點(diǎn)，并對(duì)內(nèi)容加以擴(kuò)充；各要點(diǎn)之間可使用一些承接性的句子和短語(yǔ)來(lái)增加文章的流暢性。文中注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用等問(wèn)題。
【亮點(diǎn)分析】
這篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，表述準(zhǔn)確流利。文中使用了Firstly首先；Secondly第二；Thirdly第三；Fourthly第四；Finally最后，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明了。文中也出現(xiàn)了很多常用短語(yǔ)，例如stay up熬夜；pay attention to注意； had better最好；communication with與……交流；等等。