Question

在2014年3月13日結(jié)束的兩會(huì)中，李克強(qiáng)總理提到“干一寸勝過(guò)說(shuō)一尺”。我們青少年每個(gè)人都擁有夢(mèng)想，而實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想需要行動(dòng)。
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給圖片寫一篇題為“Take actions to realize our dreams” 的英語(yǔ)短文。你的短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

(1)描述圖片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物(Frank)、動(dòng)作等；并簡(jiǎn)要表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)；
(2)你的夢(mèng)想是成為一名……，你將如何努力實(shí)現(xiàn)（至少兩點(diǎn)）。
注意：
(1)詞數(shù)100詞左右，短文首段已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
(2)文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及自己的姓名。
Take actions to realize our dreams
All of us have dreams, but how can we realize our dreams?
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                              

Answer 1

Take actions to realize our dreams
All of us have dreams, but how can we realize our dreams?
From the pictures, we know that Frank only lay in bed and dreamed to become a doctor when he was 15 years old. However, 45 years later he still dreams to be a doctor lying in bed. It is clear that he lives in the dream without any actions. This is the reason why he has failed to realize his dream. In fact, it is not an easy thing to realize the dream.
As a student in Grade Nine, I also have a dream. I would like to be an engineer. And I will realize my dream step by step. First I should work hard. As the saying goes：“No pains，no gains.” Don’t be afraid of any difficulty. Difficulty will make me wiser, braver and stronger. Next, to finish it, I ought to believe in myself all the time.
Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給圖片寫一篇題為“Take actions to realize our dreams” 的英語(yǔ)短文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些長(zhǎng)句和名言，為文章增色不少.如: we know that Frank only lay in bed and dreamed to become a doctor when he was 15 years old. （我們知道Frank只是躺在床上夢(mèng)想著當(dāng)他15歲時(shí)能成為一名醫(yī)生。）“No pains，no gains.”（不勞無(wú)獲），Nothing is impossible if we put our hearts into it.（有志者，事竟成）等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié) ,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.