Question

假如你是第二中學(xué)的一名初三學(xué)生劉星，你要寫(xiě)一封信給青少年專(zhuān)家Sigmund，告訴他你遇到的問(wèn)題，并請(qǐng)求幫助。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中的信息完成這封信。

姓名	劉星
星座	Gemini
最喜歡的顏色	橙色，因?yàn)槌壬�代表著快�?lè)。
個(gè)人特質(zhì)	善良、慷慨、自信，富有創(chuàng)造力
遇到的問(wèn)題	1. 迷戀動(dòng)漫真人秀(cosplay)，會(huì)花很多時(shí)間在這上面； 2. 父母對(duì)你不滿(mǎn)意，要求你放棄這個(gè)愛(ài)好； 3. … (至少再補(bǔ)充兩個(gè))
目前需求	希望得到建議

注意：1．詞數(shù)90左右。書(shū)信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．書(shū)信須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順：
3．書(shū)信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
Dear Sigmund，
My name is Liu Xing. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School.
                                                                         
                                                                        
                                                                          
                                                                          
I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
Your

Answer 1

Dear Sigmund，
My name is Liu Xing. I’m a Grade 9 student in No 2 Middle School.My constellation is Gemini。My favorite color is orange  ,because orange stands for happiness.I think I am kind-hearted, I often help the olds.I am also generous and confident.I am a creative boy.I often think of new jokes to make my friends laugh.
Though I am a good boy,  I have some problems .I like cosplay very much .I often spend a lot of time on cosplay.But my parents are strict with me,they want me to give up this hobby,because they think it wastes my time.I have no time to study.I like chatting on line,my mother says that is a bad habit.And sometimes I come home too late,my parents are not happy.They aksme to get home on time.I don’t know how to slove these problems.Can you give me some advice?
Yours,
Liu Xing

試題分析：根據(jù)題目提示，我們應(yīng)該確定本文的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)應(yīng)該用第一人稱(chēng)；注意描述的順序；注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)和固定詞組搭配，注意連詞的運(yùn)用。注意句子的順暢，應(yīng)符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。這是一篇書(shū)信，主意格式及語(yǔ)氣。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中用了許多固定短語(yǔ)，如my favorite color，be strict with，have no time to do sth，chat on line；come home too late，hand in，on time，give up等，能夠很好的連接文章。根據(jù)表格，劉星有好的方面也有不好的方面，所以分開(kāi)對(duì)比，效果更好。