【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李華，是向陽(yáng)中學(xué)九年級(jí)（1）班的一名學(xué)生，你的初中生活即將結(jié)束， 請(qǐng)你以“My suggestions”為題寫一篇 80 詞左右的短文，在學(xué)習(xí)、生活、校園活 動(dòng)、同學(xué)關(guān)系這幾個(gè)方面給七年級(jí)的新生提幾點(diǎn)建議，并提出你的希望和祝愿。 寫作要求：1、內(nèi)容必須包含所給的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫。

2、語(yǔ)篇完整，語(yǔ)句通順。語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范。

3、文中不能出現(xiàn)除題目以外的個(gè)人信息，否則一律不予評(píng)分。

4、開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

【答案】My Suggestions

My name is Li Hua. I’m a student in Class 1, Grade 9 in Xiangyang Middle School. Here I’d like to share some advice on how to live a meaningful and colourfulschool life in middle school.

First, We should make a study plan to balance every subject. It’s a good idea to listen to the teacher carefully in class and finish home work on time after class.Second, It’s important to develop good habits in middle school. How about doing exercise and practice playing kinds of balls in order to keep healthy?Third, Why not take part in school activities and make more friends?Last but not least, we had better get on well with our classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in trouble.

I hope these suggestions will help you. If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in middle school life.

【解析】

1. 從作文的話題來看，今年的作文題延續(xù)了往年�？嫉男@類型作文， 為中學(xué)生所熟悉，貼近學(xué)生生活的實(shí)際，讓考生有話可寫。

2. 從命題的形式上，今年仍然是常見的“提綱式”作文，給出要點(diǎn)提示，給考生留下足夠的自主發(fā)揮空間， 同時(shí)也有效防止考生“直譯”要點(diǎn)，對(duì)寫作能力的要求在不斷提高。

3. 從寫作類型上來看，本次作文屬于表達(dá)建議類型的作文。在寫作的得分點(diǎn)要求上，只要同學(xué)們能按老師平時(shí)要求的注意事項(xiàng)去把握好作文的四大得分點(diǎn)：（1）書寫工整；（2）要點(diǎn)齊全，且有邏輯；（3）語(yǔ)法正確；（4）句式多樣。特別是在句式多樣性方面，我們切忌使用重復(fù)的句型，要有意識(shí)地使用以往學(xué)過的表建議類型的句子，來達(dá)到句式多樣性的要求。

亮點(diǎn)說明：

本文使用了邏輯連接詞First/Second/Third，使文章層次清晰。

【高分句型一】

Here I’d like to share some advice on how to live a meaningful and colourful school life in middle school. 在這里，我想和大家分享一些關(guān)于如何在中學(xué)里過一個(gè)有意義和豐富多彩的學(xué)校生活的建議。how to live a meaningful and colourful school life，做介詞on的賓語(yǔ)。

【高分句型二】

Last but not least, we had better get on well with our classmates and teachers because they will help us when we are in trouble. 最后但同樣重要的是，我們最好與我們的同學(xué)和老師相處好，因?yàn)樗麄儠?huì)幫助我們當(dāng)我們遇到麻煩。because they will help us when we are in trouble.是由because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。

【高分句型三】

If we follow the advice, we will be sure to make great progress in middle school life. 如果我們聽從勸告，我們一定會(huì)在中學(xué)生活中取得很大進(jìn)步。If we follow the advice是由if引導(dǎo)的條件句。

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