Question

假如你是王平（Wang Ping），初中即將畢業(yè)，給安德森（Anderson）發(fā)了份電子郵件，告訴他你將如何度過(guò)這個(gè)暑假。（90詞左右，包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）
要點(diǎn)：1、跟隨父母一起做的一件事，如出去旅游、拜訪親友等等；
2、自己的日常生活安排情況，如做家務(wù)、堅(jiān)持鍛煉、讀書、適當(dāng)看電視、完成作業(yè)等；
3、計(jì)劃做一件對(duì)你將來(lái)的學(xué)習(xí)、生活有幫助的事。如學(xué)鋼琴、參加夏令營(yíng)等活動(dòng)；
Dear Anderson，                                                                    
How is everything going? I am very happy to tell you                                 
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
Your Sincerely,
Wang Ping

Answer 1

Dear Anderson，                                                                    
How is everything going? I am very happy to tell you about my summer holiday. I am leaving from my school in July. I will have a long Summer holiday. I will go to Beijing with my parents because my grandparents live there. There are lots of beautiful places. We want to visit them on the vacation. I usually do the chores. In the moring, I will go for a walk in the park. Then read some famous books, do my homework, watch TV. I will plan to learn to play the piano,or I will take part in a Summer Camp because these activities can help me to learn more. I think we can chat on the Internet. You can help me with my English and I can tell you about my story. Do you agree? I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Your Sincerely,
Wang Ping

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中正確使用動(dòng)詞的適當(dāng)形式，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文采用樂(lè)觀者的角度與焦慮者的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行對(duì)比，恰當(dāng)好處運(yùn)用了形容詞的比較級(jí)，從而更清晰的表達(dá)出中心思想。最后作者提出 自己的想法，使文章內(nèi)函得到升華，那就是共同努力創(chuàng)建美好家園。