Question

【題目】寫作

校學(xué)生會(huì)準(zhǔn)備在元旦舉行征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示, 回想自己在生活中遇到的最好的一位朋友, 以“My Best Friend”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

內(nèi)容包括：

喜歡好朋友的原因; 你們兩個(gè)在外貌、生活習(xí)慣、性格、學(xué)習(xí)、運(yùn)動(dòng)、愛好等方面的相同和不同之處。

要求：

所寫內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括所提供的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。

My Best Friend

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Answer 1

【答案】My Best Friend

I have many friends,but Jim is one of my best friends.He is not handsome,but kind-hearted.We know each other at primary school.He was the tallest in our class at that time.We like the same food, but different sports. He likes football while I like ping-pong. He is good at study English,but I like Chinese.

Whenever I feel sad,he will play with me and comfort me.However,he does not spoilt me.For example,every time I meet difficulties in study,I would like to copy his,but no matter what I say,he never gives his homework to me to copy.Instead he teaches me how to do it .All in all,no matter what difficulties I meet ,he will help me.He makes me realize that a friend in need is a friend indeed.

【解析】

本文是一篇給材料作文。要求以“My Best Friend”為題，介紹自己在生活中遇到的最好的一位朋友。內(nèi)容包括：喜歡好朋友的原因; 你們兩個(gè)在外貌、生活習(xí)慣、性格、學(xué)習(xí)、運(yùn)動(dòng)、愛好等方面的相同和不同之處。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱用第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作的時(shí)候，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性；同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。