Question

【題目】在你的生活或?qū)W習(xí)中，你認(rèn)為快樂是什么？也許是擁有一位慈母、一位良師、

一位摯友、一本好書、一只寵物、一個(gè)夢(mèng)想……珍惜眼前的快樂，快樂就在身邊。請(qǐng)以“Happiness Around Me”為題，選取一個(gè)角度，用英語寫一篇短文，以表達(dá)你的真情實(shí)感。

內(nèi)容包括：1. What is happiness in your opinion ?

2. As a student, how can you get happiness? Give an example or tell a story.

寫作要求：1. 詞數(shù)100詞左右。

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和姓名。

3. 語言力求準(zhǔn)確，書寫美觀，卷面整潔。

“Happiness Around Me”

Answer 1

【答案】If we ask people what is happiness, they will give us the answer like a lot of money because we fight all our lives to make money. The pursuit of fortune and fame bring people the great sense of satisfaction, while the true happiness is ignored by most people. No matter how much money we make, it can’t make up the time for having dinner with our parents. In China, there is the saying that it is too late to raise parents when the children have made enough money. Money can’t buy everything, but we can cherish every moment with our relatives, which worths all. Don’t do it until it is too late.

【解析】這是一篇提綱作文，寫作中注意將所提示的內(nèi)容情況要介紹清楚。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語，句式等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要是第一人稱和第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中注意語義通順，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。