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18．假如你是某雜志社編輯Mr．Knowledgeable，根據(jù)中學(xué)生 Bob的來信內(nèi)容，給他寫封回信，幫助解決他所遇到的問題．字數(shù)80-100，開頭已給出．
Dear Knowledgeable，
My problem is that I can't get on with my family．My parents always say"no"to my ideas without any reason．So I often quarrel（吵架） with them．Also，my brother is not very nice to me．He always refuses to let me watch my favorite TV show．Instead，he watches whatever he wants until late at night．I don't think this is fair．At home，I always feel lonely and nervous．Is that normal？What can I do？
Bob

Dear Bob
It's normal to have these feelings．Why don't you talk about these feelings with your family？First，it's not right to quarrel with your parents．I don't think quarrelling can solve problems．You'd better have a talk with your parents．Tell them to have a discussion with you before saying"no"to your ideas．Second，Why not sit down and communicate with your brother？You should explain that you don't mind him watching TV all the time．However，he should let you watch your favourite TV show．I hope things will be better soon．Good luck!
Knowledgeable．

Answer 1

分析 這篇作文要求我們以某雜志社編輯的身份給Bob寫一封回信．首先我們必須要讀懂Bob的來信，知道Bob有什么問題．根據(jù)這封信的內(nèi)容可知，Bob遇到的問題是他和他的家人相處得不好，他經(jīng)常跟父母吵架，和哥哥的關(guān)系也不好．因此我們要根據(jù)這一內(nèi)容，幫助Bob解決他的問題，給他一些建議．這些內(nèi)容需要我們自己來想象，給出的建議要符合這個情景，能對Bob起到幫助的作用．例如，我們可以建議他坐下來和父母談一談，把你的想法跟父母說清楚，爭取獲得他們的理解和支持；和自己的哥哥也要進行很好的溝通，讓他知道你的意見，互相理解．在提建議的時候，我們經(jīng)常用到一些句型，如why not…，you should…，you'd better…等．注意語句之間的連接，使文章表達流暢．文體是一封信，注意信的格式；因為這篇文章主要是給Bob提出一些建議，所以時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時；人稱主要為第二人稱you．

解答 答案：
Dear Bob，
It's normal to have these feelings．Why don't you talk about these feelings with your family？First，it's not right to quarrel with your parents．I don't think quarrelling can solve problems．You'd better have a talk with your parents．Tell them to have a discussion with you before saying"no"to your ideas．Second，Why not sit down and communicate with your brother？You should explain that you don't mind him watching TV all the time．However，he should let you watch your favourite TV show．I hope things will be better soon．Good luck!
Yours，
Knowledgeable

點評 此題為材料作文．首先要仔細審題，閱讀好Bob的來信先提煉出信的中心內(nèi)容，才能在作文中給他提出相應(yīng)的建議．提建議時可以分幾條去表達，這樣比較明確；文中要多使用表示提建議的句型，比如例文中的why not…，you'd better，you should等．還有使用賓語從句和時間狀語從句等，也可以讓文章增色不少．