Question

請(qǐng)給你英國的筆友Neil寫一封信，介紹一下你家鄉(xiāng)的情況，并邀請(qǐng)他到你家鄉(xiāng)來玩。
70字左右。要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 我的家鄉(xiāng)阜寧離上海幾百公里(kilometre)。這里空氣清新。
2. 我住在市中心的一個(gè)小區(qū)里。周圍有許多商店和飯店。
3. 小區(qū)里有許多志愿者。他們可以幫你解決各種問題。
4. 如果你來，我將帶你參觀東臺(tái)。
Dear Neil
I am glad to hear from you, and I hope you will come to my hometown. ——————————
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I look forward to meeting you soon.
Yours 

Answer 1

Dear Neil
I am glad to hear from you, and I hope you will come to my hometown.My hometown Funing is several kilometers from Shanghai.The air is fresh here.I live in a community in the center of the city.There are a lot of shopping center and restaurants around here.There are many volunteers in the neighborhood,they can help you solve all kinds of problems.If you come,I’ll show you around Dongtai.
I look forward to meeting you soon.                                                                    
Yours 

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如I am glad to hear from you,in the center of the city. a lot of shopping center and restaurants, in the neighborhood,solve all kinds of problems.show you around, I look forward to meeting you soon. 等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。