Question

【題目】 學(xué)校廣播站正在征稿，請(qǐng)按以下要求用英文寫一篇廣播稿。

要求 ：（1）描述三年中令你難忘的一節(jié)課（包括這節(jié)課中令你難忘的活動(dòng)、事件發(fā)生的過(guò)程）；

（2）談?wù)勀愕母惺芑蛟u(píng)價(jià)。

注意： （1）60詞左右； （2）文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透漏考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息。

Answer 1

【答案】

An Unforgettable Lesson

I've had many lessons in my school life. The most unforgettable is the one that was given by an American young man.

It was on Tuesday morning in March. A sunny young man came into our classroom, with a big smile on his face. He greeted us in English and then began his class. He was not serious at all. During his class, he neither taught us English grammar rules nor asked us to do lots of written exercises. He just played games with us, taught us several English songs and helped us act out a conversation. When it was my turn to show, I was too nervous to say a word. He smiled at me and told me I could do it. With his help, I played the conversation with my partner at last. I was really encouraged. He taught me the most important lesson of my life: to believe in myself.

Happy time always flies! The class was over. We took a photo with him in the classroom. This lesson was quite different from those we had before. I will never forget his smile, his songs and everything he had done in his class.

【解析】

試題分析：本次作文為提綱類作文，要求按要求用英文寫一篇廣播稿。寫作提綱已經(jīng)列出，要求明確，故要完成寫作任務(wù)，務(wù)必根據(jù)提綱把各要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇范文成功地完成了寫作任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。本文應(yīng)用了很多短語(yǔ)使得文章很生動(dòng)，例如He was not serious at all. During his class, he neither taught us English grammar rules nor asked us to do lots of written exercises. He just played games with us, taught us several English songs and helped us act out a conversation. We took a photo with him in the classroom. This lesson was quite different from those we had before.定語(yǔ)從句The most unforgettable is the one that was given by an American young man. I will never forget his smile, his songs and everything he had done in his class.的應(yīng)用更使得短文表述更準(zhǔn)確。總之，該文是一篇不錯(cuò)的短文。