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【題目】文段表達(dá)

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于50詞的回信。信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。所給英文提示詞語(yǔ)僅供選用。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

66.假如你叫李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Jim要來(lái)北京參加交換生活動(dòng)。他寫郵件向你了解中國(guó)的禮儀，你們通常在家和學(xué)校怎么做，以及與人融洽相處最重要的是什么。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的問(wèn)題回復(fù)郵件。

提示詞語(yǔ)：shake hands，eat first，quite，respect，friendly

1.What are you supposed to do when you meet someone for the first time?What should you do when older people are at the dinner table?

2. What do you usually do to be polite at home and at school?

3. What is the most important to get along with in China?

To Jim

From Li Hua

Subject Good manners

Hi! Tom，

I’m glad to hear from you.Welcome to Beijing.

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I hope you will enjoy yourself in Beijing.

Yours.

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi !Jim,

I’m glad to hear from you. Welcome to Beijing. In China, we are supposed to shake hands when we meet someone for the first time. And we are not supposed to eat first when older people are at the table.

For students, it is necessary to be polite to others. At home, we never start talking until our parents finish their words. At school, greeting teachers and schoolmates is considered polite behavior. We always stand up when we talk to our teachers. Besides, when we are in public places like museums or libraries, it’s important to keep quiet.

In a word, showing enough respect for others is the secret to getting along with people both in China and in other countries.

I hope you’ll enjoy yourself in Beijing.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文多次使用連接詞and，以及頻度副詞never，always等為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。