Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如在班會課上，老師要求你介紹自己的家庭情況，請按照以下要點(diǎn)介紹。

家庭位置	離市中心不遠(yuǎn)的一個小鎮(zhèn),從陽臺上可以看到青山綠樹。
家庭成員	爸爸：技師，擅長檢查、修理電腦。
	媽媽：醫(yī)生，當(dāng)人們不適時，會使他們感覺好些。
	自己：社區(qū)中心的志愿者，時刻準(zhǔn)備伸出援助之手，打算邀請同學(xué)去拜訪老人。
感受	覺得……（用一句話展開）

Hello, Everyone! Let me tell you something about my family. ________________________________________________________________________________________

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I think he should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Tom

Answer 1

【答案】

I live in a small town not far way from the city centre. I can see the green hills and trees from the balcony.My father is an engineer. He is good at checking and fixing computers. My mother is a doctor.She will make people feel better when they do not feel well. I am a volunteer at the community centre. I am always ready to help others. I am going to invite my classmates to visit old people. And I am lucky to live in a neighbourhood like this.

【解析】

試題分析：因?yàn)槎涛氖?/span>介紹自己的家庭情況，所以句子的時態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時，要注意主謂一致問題，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要注意上下文的銜接，最后要敘述自己的感受。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語和句式，如：I live in a small town not far way from the city centre. I can see the green hills and trees from the balcony. I am always ready to help others. And I am lucky to live in a neighbourhood like this.用了when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。