Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)。

保持健康對(duì)于成長(zhǎng)中的我們是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該如何保持健康呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面信息提示，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。

1） 有健康的飲食習(xí)慣。

2）愉快的心情是一劑良藥。

3）參加運(yùn)動(dòng)，強(qiáng)身健體。

4）遠(yuǎn)離煙和酒。

Keeping Healthy

I think keeping healthy is very important for us.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Keeping Healthy

I think keeping healthy is very important for us. How can we keep healthy? In my opnion, the most important is that we should have healthy eating habits.Breakfast gives us enough energy for the morning. So don’t go to school without breakfast.And we should eat the right food to keep healthy. For example, we should eat more vegetables and fruit,less meat.

Second, playing sports can also help us to keep fit. We can run on the playground. Swimming is intersting for us. Also, we can climbing mountains on weekends. They are good for our legs, lungs and heart.

Third, happiness is important for our health. It is the best medicine.Be happy to be healthy.

The last but not least, we must stay away from smoking and drinking. They may cause cancer and many illness. We should give up smoking.

Doing this, we will keep healthy.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫(xiě)作的提綱，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來(lái)加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如In my opnion, the most important is that we should have healthy eating habits.Breakfast gives us enough energy for the morning. The last but not least, we must stay away from smoking and drinking. They may cause cancer and many illness.等等。