Question

現(xiàn)如今，社會各個(gè)方面都在改革，當(dāng)然英語學(xué)科也不例外。好多人認(rèn)為等工作以后英語基本上都用不上了，所以，我們就不應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)英語了。而有的人則認(rèn)為，當(dāng)今社會快速發(fā)展，全球一體化更是大勢所趨，所以，英語作為一個(gè)工具不可缺少。你認(rèn)為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)英語嗎？請以此為話題寫一篇文章。
要求：
觀點(diǎn)明確；
卷面整潔；
語言優(yōu)美，沒有語法錯(cuò)誤。

Answer 1

Nowdays, all aspect in society has changed , English is no exception. Many people think that  English has not been used widely, so we should not learn English.
Others think that English is one of the most common languages that are speaking in the world. According to the research, there is nearly one person in every ten people can speak English. We need to learn English because as our country's economy's develops, there are more and more opportunities for us to visit other countries. If we want to communicate with foreigners who don't know how to speak Chinese, we need to speak English. It's important for us to learn English because we want to learn other people's technologies and cultures, therefore we can improve our knowledge.
In my opinion , learning English is necessary, no matter what happens.

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，話題是大家熟悉的英語學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)生們有話可說，而且文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來了，但只是一個(gè)提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中運(yùn)用一些比較常見的短語learn English學(xué)英語  communicate with 與某人交流，It's important for us to do ，做某事對某人來說是非常重要的。Others think that English is one of the most common languages that are speaking in the world這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用賓語從句，one of +名詞復(fù)數(shù)，that are speaking in the world是languages的定語從句。It's important for us to learn English because we want to learn other people's technologies and cultures, therefore we can improve our knowledge這個(gè)句子用because來連接，還運(yùn)用therefore表示結(jié)果，很好提高文章的檔次。