Question

以My friend and I為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文。

要求：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60字。

      2. 用比較級(jí)描述你與朋友的外貌，性格特征、興趣愛(ài)好，學(xué)習(xí)等方面的異同。

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Tom is my best friend, and we get along with each other quite well. He is taller than me ,but I am stronger than him, because I like playing all kinds of sports. But Tom is quieter and smarter on study. He likes reading and listening to music, especially English songs. There are so many differences between us. But we also have something in common. We both like playing computer games. And on weekends we often do homework together and he helps me with my study. He is such a nice friend.

【解析】

這是一篇以我和我的朋友為題的命題作文。在寫(xiě)作前要審清題意，看清要求。作文要求用到比較級(jí)來(lái)寫(xiě)我和朋友在外貌，興趣愛(ài)好等的異同。所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定要用到比較級(jí)�？梢杂玫谝蝗朔Q(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)理清思緒，注意句子的完整性和句與句之間的銜接，可適當(dāng)利用連詞和帶有總結(jié)性的句子，使文章更緊湊和流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】

這篇文章緊扣題意，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，句意表達(dá)清晰完整。文章中用到了很多不錯(cuò)的短語(yǔ)和句式，例如get along with相處；There are so many differences between us我們之間有很多不同； have something in common相同之處； he helps me with my study他幫助我學(xué)習(xí)；He is such a nice friend他是一個(gè)多好的朋友啊。句與句之間用到了一些連詞如but, especially, and 等，使邏輯思維更強(qiáng)。

考點(diǎn)：命題作文