Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共1題，滿分15分）

幫助他人，快樂自己。李華一家常在周末去社區(qū)參加志愿者活動(dòng)。假如你是李華的同學(xué)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提供的信息介紹李華一家，描述他們上周六所做的事，你對(duì)他們的做法有何感想？你是否愿意參與類似的活動(dòng)？說明理由。

人物	職業(yè)與愛好		具體活動(dòng)
爸爸	電腦工程師	修理	為鄰居檢修電腦
媽媽	公司經(jīng)理	DIY	為社區(qū)的老人包粽子
李華	中學(xué)生	下棋	教小學(xué)生下棋
你	……

要求：

1.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括提供的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.評(píng)價(jià)李華一家的做法：表達(dá)你的意愿，并說明理由。

3.文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

4.語氣通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。

5.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名，校名及地點(diǎn)。

I am Li Hua’s classmate and I’ve known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work.

Answer 1

【答案】

I am Li Hua's classmate and I've known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work. His father is a computer engineer. He's good at repairing things. His mother is a manager of a company. She likes DIY. Li Hua is a middle school student. He plays chess well.

Last Saturday, his family went there again and did something for others. His father checked and fixed computers for neighbours. His mother made rice dumplings for the elderly people there. Li Hua taught some primary school students to play chess.

I think what his family do is meaningful. I also want to be a volunteer, like Li Hua. I will clean the house for the old people.

As we know, helping others is helping ourselves, it can also bring happiness to us all.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求以李華同學(xué)的身份，介紹一下李華一家周末經(jīng)常去社區(qū)參加志愿者活動(dòng)的情況以及上周六他們一家去社區(qū)的具體活動(dòng)情況，并表達(dá)自己對(duì)李華一家的做法的看法。短文用第三人稱形式，經(jīng)常去社區(qū)的活動(dòng)情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，上周六的活動(dòng)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。表述自己的看法用第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文第一段介紹李華一家的職業(yè)及愛好；第二段描述上周六他們?nèi)�家在社區(qū)所做的志愿服務(wù)活動(dòng)；第三段表明自己對(duì)李華一家行為的看法。條理清楚，層次分明。短文最后：幫助別人就是幫助我們自己，它能給我們帶來快樂。點(diǎn)明主旨，升華主題。