Question

14．假設(shè)某中學生英文報開展關(guān)于高中生活的征文活動，請你根據(jù)下表所提示的要點，以My ideal senior high school 為題，用英語為該報寫一篇短文，簡述理想中的高中生活情形，以及你對高中學習生活的展望．

理想高中	校園	環(huán)境優(yōu)美
	老師	耐心教導
	同學	樂于分享
	學習	輕松有趣
	課外	活動豐富
我的展望	（請考生結(jié)合自身實際，自擬至少兩點內(nèi)容）

注意：
1）表達中必須包括所給要點，可以適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯．
2）詞數(shù)90左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3）表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名．
My ideal senior high school
We will be senior high school students soon．In my ideal senior high school．there are many green trees and beautiful flowers．The teachers there are patient enough to explain difficult problems to us，while the students are willing to share their joy and worries with each other．We have fewer subjects and less homework．After school we can take part in all kinds of activities．In this way，our new school life will be full of fun．
I hope to make any friends and enjoy my school life in senior high school．I also hope I can make great progress in my study．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以My ideal senior high school 為題簡述理想中的高中生活情形，以及你對高中學習生活的展望．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1校園：環(huán)境優(yōu)美
2老師：耐心教導
3同學：樂于分享
4學習：輕松有趣
5課外：活動豐富
6我的展望

常用到的重點短語：
adj+enough to do sth足夠…做某事
be willing to do sth愿意做某事
take part in參加
be full of充滿
make progress取得進步

高分句型：
1．The teachers there are①patient enough to explain difficult problems to us，（老師：耐心教導）②while the students ③are willing to share their joy and worries with each other．
①adj+enough to do sth足夠…做某事
②while引導的時間狀語從句
③be willing to do sth愿意做某事
2．①In this way，our new school life will②be full of fun．
①in this way 因此，用來總結(jié)．
②be full of充滿，相當于be filled with．

解答 My ideal senior high school
We will be senior high school students soon．In my ideal senior high school，there are many green trees and beautiful flowers．（校園：環(huán)境優(yōu)美）The teachers there are patient enough to explain difficult problems to us，（老師：耐心教導）while the students are willing to share their joy and worries with each other．（高分句型）（同學：樂于分享）We have fewer subjects and less homework．（學習：輕松有趣）After school we can take part in all kinds of activities．（課外：活動豐富）In this way，our new school life will be full of fun．（高分句型）
I hope to make any friends and enjoy my school life in senior high school．I also hope I can make great progress in my study．（我的展望）

點評 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時的英語學習中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．