Question

【題目】書面表達

96.作為一名中學生，我們不僅要有獨立意識，還需有團隊合作意識。在團隊合作學習中，我們能互相學習，互相幫助，共同討論。能分享學習中的快樂與悲傷，能感受到愛與被愛。讓團隊合作精神伴隨我們成長!

請你以 How to learn together as a team?為標題寫一篇英文演講稿，代表學校參加達州市中學生英語演講比賽。

要求：1．卷面整潔(無污跡)，書寫工整(有美感)。(卷面分1分)

2．全文字數(shù)90詞左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入單詞總數(shù)。

3．條理清楚，句式規(guī)范，標點符號和大小寫使用正確。

4．內(nèi)容盡量包括提示信息，并適當發(fā)揮；文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名。

5．參考詞匯：friendly, help, discuss I(talk, listen), share, grow up,

How to learn together as a team?

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “How to learn together as a team”.

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That’s all for my speech. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】How to learn together as a team

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is "How to learn together as a team". It's

very important for us to learn, think by ourselves. And it is also important for us to learn together

as a team

First, we must be friendly to others, whether beautiful or ugly, tall or short, kids or adults. We should help others when they are in trouble. For example, your classmates can't finish homework Your friend is becoming upset when he can't solve the problems between his parents and him. Here is no doubt that helping others is helping itself. In a team, anyone is helped and anyone helps others.

Second, we are supposed to discuss. When we discuss, we either talk or listen. We have to talk

clearly and we must listen carefully, so you can find where the mistakes will be and how you should correct them. After discussing, you are sure to get more.

Third, in a team, it is very important to share. Many of us are only one or two from our families. We are used to thinking about ourselves. So we are loved more. Now it is time to learn to share with others; Share love and loved; share happiness and sadness and so on. Let’s grow up in sharing!

In a word, we are like a family in a team. Let’s help each other, discuss happily and share little by little. Then we grow up.

That’s all for my speech. Thank you!

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文，根據(jù)題目中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下How to learn together as a team? 所提供的內(nèi)容中列舉了我們不僅要有獨立意識，還需有團隊合作意識。在團隊合作學習中，我們能互相學習，互相幫助，共同討論。能分享學習中的快樂與悲傷，能感受到愛與被愛。時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱為第一人稱。注意演講比賽中必須包含所提供的內(nèi)容中的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性。

【高分句型一】

We should help others when they are in trouble. 當別人遇到困難時，我們應(yīng)該幫助他們。when they are in trouble.是由when 引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句。

【高分句型二】

We have to talk clearly and we must listen carefully, so you can find where the mistakes will be and how you should correct them. 我們必須清楚地交談，我們必須仔細聽，這樣你就可以發(fā)現(xiàn)錯誤在哪里，你應(yīng)該如何改正。where the mistakes will be是由where 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。