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11．初中的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，三年來，在與同學(xué)們的交往中，有讓你感動的瞬間嗎？有哪些事始終讓你記憶猶新？本期學(xué)校的英語角為即將畢業(yè)的同學(xué)們開辟了"Say you，Say me"專欄．現(xiàn)在請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示自擬提綱，用英語寫一篇短文．．
內(nèi)容提示：（1）Who is he or she？
（2）What did he or she do？
（3）What did you learn from what he or she did？
要求：（1）中心突出，語義連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；
（2）詞數(shù)在80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；．
（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名，姓名請使用Daming或Lingling代替．
Here I'd like to say somethingabout Tom，one of the best students in my mind．You may feel surprised and wonder why．To some students，Tom is not best at his study．He is naughty，and sometimes even not well-behaved．But have you noticed Tom has carried the lunch boxes for us for three years？It is also Tom that makes the computer work whenever there is something wrong with it in class．
So it is easy for a person to do one kind thing，but keeping doing kind things for others is quite difficult．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇通過提問給出提綱的作文．內(nèi)容為描述在三年的初中生活中讓你感動或記憶猶新的事．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．寫作要點包括：1．介紹所描述的人；2．他或她做的事情；3．從他或她的行為中所學(xué)到的東西．
常用到的重點句型和短語：
would like to do想要做某事
one of the 形容詞最高級+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式   最…之一
It is…that 強調(diào)句型"正是…"
it is adj for a sb．to do sth．對某人來說做某事是…
keeping doing 堅持做某事
參考句子：
I want to say something about Daming．我想說一些關(guān)于大明的事．
You may feel surprised and want to know why．你或許感到驚奇并想知道為什么．
whenever it doesn't work in class．在課堂上無論它什么時候壞了．

解答 Here I'd like to say something about Tom，one of the best students in my mind．You may feel surprised and wonder why．To some students，Tom is not best at his study．He is naughty，and sometimes even not well-behaved．But have you noticed Tom has carried the lunch boxes for us for three years？It is also Tom that makes the computer work whenever there is something wrong with it in class．
So it is easy for a person to do one kind thing，but keeping doing kind things for others is quite difficult．

點評 這是一篇給出以英文給出題目和提綱的作文．考生需細(xì)心鉆研提綱材料，弄清提綱的思路和旨意是寫好提綱作文的前提．審題時，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀、仔細(xì)分析提綱材料．然后在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上巧妙構(gòu)思，合理的展開全文．本作文考生可按提綱順序以三段形式開展自己的作文，且要注意中心突出，語義連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范．