Question

國有國法，校有校規(guī)。在你的學校中一定有很多規(guī)章制度來規(guī)范中學生的行為，使學生們都能健康成長。請你寫一篇小短文向大家介紹一些校規(guī)、校紀，如能用自己的觀點來評價就更好了。（80詞左右）開頭已給出。

What rules do you have in your school?

There’re a lot of rules in our school.

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Answer 1

【答案】

There are many rules in our school, At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I think young people should look smart and so I'd like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms ,we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.              

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上；結合材料內容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: There are有……；have to不得不；I'd like to我喜歡……等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用, 讓文章更出彩。

考點：提綱作文。