Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分10分）

現(xiàn)在，不少青少年發(fā)現(xiàn)越來(lái)越難與父母溝通和交流，請(qǐng)以“How to get on well with parents?”為題，寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶?/span>。

要求：請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給題目，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60個(gè)；語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)；短文必須寫在答題卷上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, we can not communicate with our parents well. I think it’s because we are too busy. We don’t have enough time to stay together.

How to communication with your parents? Here are some suggestions.

First, both you and your parents should spend time with each other. Second, try to talk to your parents politely, or they will not feel like talking to you. Third, try to think about your parents more, so you will find that you can understand them.

If you follow these, you can get on well with your parents.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:worry about擔(dān)心；enough to do sth； think about考慮；get on with和……相處等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。