Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

所有的生物都是地球的主人，人與動(dòng)物共享同一家園。假如你是學(xué)生John,請你以Protect Environment（環(huán)境） and Love animals 為題寫一篇演講稿，在學(xué)校舉辦的“第六屆年度英語節(jié)”活動(dòng)中作專題演講比賽。

要求：１. 演講內(nèi)容包含所有要點(diǎn)，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

２.條理清晰、字跡工整。詞數(shù)100詞左右。

存在的問題	1. 人們砍伐(cut down)樹木和森林，所以很多動(dòng)物無處可住。 2. 人們?yōu)檗r(nóng)場和建筑物讓出地方，所以野生動(dòng)物生存空間越來越少。 3. 獵人為了錢而捕殺動(dòng)物，很多野生動(dòng)物死亡。
解決的方法	1. 建更多的保護(hù)區(qū)。 2. 立法……
你的建議	………(1-2點(diǎn))

Protect Environment and love animals

Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report about protecting the environment and loving animals.

All the living things are the host of the earth. And we share the same home with them. However, our environment is becoming worse and worse.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Protect Environment and love animals

Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to e here to give a report about protecting environment and loving animals.

All the living things are the host of the earth. We share the same home with them.

However, our environment is becoming worse and worse. People cut down trees and forests, so many animals have nowhere to live. And we make more space for farms and buildings, many wild animals lose their living areas. Some hunters hunt animals for money, then many wild animals died because of this.

Now, the government takes actions to protect environment and wild animals. And we also should make laws to protect them.

As students, we should try our best to do something to protect them, such as writing to newspapers or putting something on the Internet to let more people know about it.

If we do something to protect them, we will have a better world. If we don’t do anything, perhaps one day we will leave our home-Earth.

【解析】這篇短文要求我們根據(jù)提示寫一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的演講。我們要用熱情洋溢的語言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來。寫作中要包含你個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)、現(xiàn)在存在的問題、解決的辦法以及其重要性等。我們在寫作時(shí)要注意：1.要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。 2. 要把提示的內(nèi)容全部寫上。3.要避免句式的單一。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第一人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：1. 本文緊扣題目要求，做了一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的演講。本文詳細(xì)、全面地描述了演講稿的內(nèi)容，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。語言鏗鏘有力、有說服力；其中使用了一些復(fù)雜句式和短語，包含狀語從句的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少。條件狀語從句：If we do something to protect them, we will have a better world. 有形容詞的比較級：However, our environment is becoming worse and worse. 學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。