Question

暑假即將來臨，某校學生會打算在假期舉行為貧困地區(qū)和受災地區(qū)的孩子們奉獻愛心的活動。請你用英語寫一封倡議書，號召同學們用力所能及的方式伸出援助之手，奉獻自己的愛心。
要求：
1、文中應包含：至少兩種幫助方式：這樣做的目的和意義。
2、字數80～800；短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear schoolmates,
While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vacation is coming. Let’s do something to help them.
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Student’s Union
June 13, 2008

Answer 1

Dear schoolmates,
While we are sitting in our bright classroom, remember there are lots of children in the poor and disaster areas needing our help badly. Summer vacation is coming. Let’s do something to help them.
As students, we can give away our pocket money, school things, some of our clothes and toys . We can also donate some books to them in order to open up their eyes to the outside world. We may raise money for charity by collecting used bottled, plastics, waste paper and so on , or by doing part-time jobs, such as, handing out advertisements, selling newspapers and so on. Making pen pals with them will be a better way to help deal with problems in their study.
The more we devote/do, the better world would be!
Student’s Union
June 13, 2008

解析試題分析：本題是寫一篇給貧窮或受災地區(qū)奉獻愛心的倡議書，根據題目要求我們從我們的現狀，貧窮地區(qū)孩子們的現狀，我們如何提供幫助，為什么提供幫助，以及幫助的意義等方面去寫。在寫作時我們同時要注意倡議書格式，以及正確句式的使用。寫作時要注重語言的連貫性和準確性。
考點：獻愛心倡議書的寫法。
點評：在寫倡議書時，我們要注意書寫的格式，同時我們要明確倡議的內容，原因和意義，寫作時要注重句型結構和詞匯的正確使用，注重語言的準確性和連貫性，不要使用錯詞或錯句，提高寫作的質量。