Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

假設(shè)你是Bob, 是學(xué)校志愿者俱樂部的一名成員，你計(jì)劃和幾位朋友進(jìn)行一個(gè)cheer up sick kids in the hospital的志愿者活動(dòng)。根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文向別人介紹這次活動(dòng)�？蛇m當(dāng)拓展。開頭已給出。

1. Time: on Saturday.

2. Place: the children’s hospital.

3. People: five volunteers and you.

4. How to go: by bike.

5. Activities: tell stories, teach English, sing songs and dance, give away gifts(禮物)。

As you know, I’m in the school volunteer club.

Answer 1

【答案】

As you know, I’m in the school volunteer club.

Last Saturday we went to be a volunteer in the Children's Hospital. We worked in the hall of the hospital in the morning. We gave direction to the patients, told them where to go for each department. In the afternoon, We went to the Inpatient department. I sent many toys to the kids, sang and danced with them. I also told stories to them to give them encouragement. We know for those kids they were very upset and very lonely at hospital. Other than their parents, the doctors and nurses in the hospital, they'd like to see more people around them and talk to them. If you have time, please join us to be the volunteer at the hospital. Let's send your care and love to the people who need it.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開頭。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文多次使用and、also，以及主從復(fù)合句如If you have time, please join me to be the volunteer at the hospital. Let's send your care and love to the people who need it.等等，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。