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根據(jù)下面3幅圖的提示，寫(xiě)一篇70～80個(gè)單詞的短文．要求能充分表達(dá)出圖畫(huà)所示的內(nèi)容，意思連貫、完整、語(yǔ)法正確．

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學(xué)生：習(xí)作： 　　Yesterday morning Meimei got up at half past six at usually(X1). After breakfast, she went to school. On the way she found a wallet lain(X2) on the road. She picked up it(X3) and stood on the roadside. She waited for a while, but nobody came and looked for it. 　　“What shall I do?” she said to herself. “If I'll wait(X4) the owner, I'll be late for school.” 　　At last she decided to send it to the police. 　　She went to the police station and gave the wallet to the policeman. 　　“You're a good girl. Thank you.” a policeman said. 　　When he went(X5) to school. Meimei was just in time for class. 　　剖析：“as usual”是固定詞組，意為“照常；像往常一樣”．不可寫(xiě)作“as usually”． 　　2．“lain on the road”作found的復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)是錯(cuò)誤的．應(yīng)該用帶現(xiàn)在分詞的復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)lying on the road．lying是lie(在……處[有])的現(xiàn)在分詞，此處意為“她發(fā)現(xiàn)在路上有一只皮夾子．” 　　3．“picked up it”是錯(cuò)誤的．須知，當(dāng)代詞(it，them等)作 pick up的賓語(yǔ)時(shí)，必須位于pick up之間，如：pick it up；如果是名詞作賓語(yǔ)，用“pick up +n．”或“pick +n．+up”都可以． 　　4．“If I'll wait for…I'll be late…”句中的從句時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．須知，在帶有條件(或時(shí)間)從句的復(fù)合句中，當(dāng)主句中的謂語(yǔ)用將來(lái)時(shí)時(shí)，從句中的謂語(yǔ)用現(xiàn)在時(shí)表示“將來(lái)”．因此，須將該句改寫(xiě)為：“If I wait for…”． 　　5．此處，按情景，不是“went to school”(上學(xué))，而是“到達(dá)學(xué)�！�，故應(yīng)將went改為got，即：“when she got to school”(get to到達(dá))． 　　總評(píng)：這篇習(xí)作能抓住圖畫(huà)要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言上雖有幾處失誤，但敘事清楚，行文流暢，意思連貫，詞語(yǔ)、結(jié)構(gòu)運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，如：decided to send…to…；gave the wallet to…；in time for class；等等．尤其是文中對(duì)話，能貼近情景，頗有生動(dòng)感．