Question

【題目】題目②

自律，即自我約束，是自我提升的一種途徑，有助于我們成長(zhǎng)，促使我們不斷前行。

某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“自律”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，談?wù)劄榱嗽鰪?qiáng)自律意識(shí)，你做過(guò)什么，以及這樣做給你帶來(lái)的好處。

提示詞語(yǔ): self-disciplined(自律的)，plan，goal，habit，improve

提示問(wèn)題: What did you do to be self-disciplined?

What benefits have you got from doing so?

Self-discipline plays an important role in our life .

Answer 1

【答案】Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respected all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the task, I developed the habit of going to bed early and going to bed early. In the society，I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.

In a word. I have benefited a lot from being self-discipline. First of all, I have had many good habits, which makes my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been to high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined has prepared me for a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.

【解析】

這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文給某網(wǎng)站投稿，談?wù)劄榱嗽鰪?qiáng)自律意識(shí)，你做過(guò)什么，以及這樣做給你帶來(lái)的好處。根據(jù)題目中給出的問(wèn)題可知，短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：首先談一談為了增強(qiáng)自律意識(shí)，你做過(guò)什么？然后談?wù)勥@樣做給你帶來(lái)的好處。第一個(gè)內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；第二個(gè)內(nèi)容應(yīng)主要使用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。題目中并沒(méi)有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，學(xué)生們應(yīng)聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際生活，展開合理的想象，將這些內(nèi)容補(bǔ)充完整后，用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，這是寫作中的一個(gè)難點(diǎn)。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先注意內(nèi)容的完整、充實(shí)，學(xué)生們可以結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際生活，寫一寫自己平時(shí)的做法。注意敘述應(yīng)有層次、有條理。其次應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)問(wèn)題，英語(yǔ)句式的結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語(yǔ)是不同的，因此不能根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)該從句式的整體考慮，先確定主干結(jié)構(gòu)，然后添加修飾成分。為提升作文檔次，應(yīng)注意使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)以及復(fù)合句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意上下連貫，表達(dá)流暢。