Question

【題目】學校將在下周舉行英文演講比賽，Jack的話題是 “對我影響最深的人”，請根據(jù)以下材料，幫他組織一篇90字左右英文演講稿，介紹一下三位對他影響最深的人。

Persons	Details
My father	1. 40多歲，充滿愛心 2. 令我驚訝的是，他已決定去世后捐贈遺體供醫(yī)學研究
Tan Dun	1. 1958年出生在湖南省中部地區(qū)，從小對音樂很感興趣 2. 成功地把中西方音樂融合在一起
Jackie Chan	1.已參演了近100部影片，獲得了許多獎項 2. 多年從事慈善工作（具體表現(xiàn)用1到2句話說明） 3. 被公認為是一位超級明星，受到人們高度贊揚

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. My topic is “the persons who have influenced me most”. They are my father, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

They are all my heroes. From now on , I will learn from them.

Answer 1

【答案】The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Jackie Chan.

My mother is a teacher. She is in her forties. She has a heart full of love and she has donated blood many times. To my surprise, she has decided to donate her body after her death.

Tan Dun is a composer. He was born in Hunan, China. He has helped build a bridge between the East and the West. He has successfully brought Chinese and Western music together.

Jackie Chan is a film star. He has acted in nearly 100 films, In the films, he joined humour and exciting action together perfectly. He has won many awards. He is also a humanitarian. He has spent many years doing charity work. He is thought highly of by many people.

They are all my heroes. They are really worth learning from.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹三位對我影響最深的人。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am happy to……，There are……，My mother is……，Tan Dun is……，He has won……，They are……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。