Question

世界上有許多種愛(ài)，母愛(ài)、父愛(ài)、師生情、手足情等等。你已是一名中學(xué)生了，在十幾年的關(guān)愛(ài)中慢慢長(zhǎng)大，母愛(ài)的細(xì)膩、父愛(ài)的含蓄……請(qǐng)你以自己的切身體會(huì)，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，介紹一下在你的心目中哪種愛(ài)最偉大。
要求：1. 通過(guò)一則細(xì)小的事情體現(xiàn)……愛(ài)的偉大。
2. 表達(dá)真實(shí)可信，內(nèi)容連貫正確，語(yǔ)言流暢，文中不得使用真名。
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Answer 1

There are many kinds of love in the world, such as mother’s love, father’s love, friends’ love and so on. But I think mother’s love is the greatest of all.
When I was young, my mother taught me to walk, speak and think. She took good care of my life. When I grew up little by little, my mother helped me to study well. She tried her best to keep me healthy. She often talked with me like my good friend. I’m lucky to own mother’s love. I wish everyone in the world could own mother’s love!

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫Alan Brown的年齡、外貌、性格、愛(ài)好以及他的日�；顒�(dòng)。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如many kinds of，such as，and so on，the greatest of all，took good care of ，grew up ，little by little，tried her best等短語(yǔ)；賓語(yǔ)從句，如 mother’s love is the greatest of all，everyone in the world could own mother’s love，狀語(yǔ)從句When I was young， When I grew up little by little。文章整體內(nèi)容飽滿，條理清晰，表達(dá)流暢。