Question

最近的一項調(diào)查研究表明：大約有20% 的學(xué)生有不吃早餐的習(xí)慣。 請根據(jù)下列表格的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇大約80字左右的英語短文，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出。

原因	1. 晚上學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)到太晚，想多睡一會而不吃早餐；
2. 家長太忙無法照顧孩子，直接給錢讓孩子自己解決早餐；
3. 一些男生拿錢去玩游戲，一些女生為了身材苗條而不吃早餐；
后果	1. 上課無精打采，成績下降；
2. 身體越來越差；
你的建議	？（至少寫出一條建議并給出理由）

 

From a recent survey, we know that about twenty percent students have no habit of having breakfast. ____________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

From a recent survey, we know that about twenty percent have no habit of having breakfast. Some of the students stay up late to study. In the morning, they prefer to sleep a little more rather than spend the time eating breakfast. Some parents are too busy to take care of their children, They have no time to cook breakfast for them. So they just give them some money to buy something to eat. But some boys spend the money playing games while some of the girls give up eating breakfast to keep slim. As a result, they can’t do well at school without breakfast. Students can’t concentrate in class because they have no breakfast. They get worse results. On the other hand, it’s bad for their health.

In my opinion, student should eat breakfast so that they can keep fit and have enough energy to have classes. If they are busy with their, parents should remind them of it. And parents should buy some food at home instead of giving them money so that they can take some to school.   

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求寫一篇有關(guān)早餐問題的議論文，本題所給材料較為詳細,動筆前先根據(jù)材料確定時態(tài)，句式，詞匯等主要內(nèi)容。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文人稱時態(tài)問題較為復(fù)雜,注意人稱與謂語動詞的一致關(guān)系,時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配。寫作中注意使用連接詞，注意表達的多樣化，做到語意連貫符合邏輯。內(nèi)容應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：在寫書面表達是首先要注意的問題就是人稱，不能混淆人稱；其次，應(yīng)注意動詞的英語，根據(jù)不同的人稱確定動詞的形式；再次，句型應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣；最后，用自己熟練掌握的句型造句。