Question

1．假如你是韓雪同學(xué)，外教Mr．Smith想組織幾名學(xué)生去一所國(guó)際學(xué)校進(jìn)行一次助學(xué)和聯(lián)誼活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你參考以下表格所提供的信息，以書信形式向Mr．Smith提出申請(qǐng)，陳述你所具備的能力并說明你打算如何開展這次活動(dòng)．

Name	Abilities	Plans
Han Xue	1．Speak English very well； 2．Get on well with kids； 3．Dance and sing songs； 4．Play volleyball and tennis； 5．…	1．Organize all kinds of activities； 2．Introduce some Chinese cultures； 3．Help foreign kids to learn Chinese； 4．Make friends with foreign kids； 5．…

要求：1．參考表格中提供的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；
4．詞數(shù)：80詞左右．（短文開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．）

Dear Mr．Smith，
I'm so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in an International School．I hope I can join in it．I think I have the abilities to help them．First I can speak Engliash very well and it is easy for me to communicate with kids．And I have a few hobbies，such as playing basketball and tennis．In addition，I can also dance and sing songs to make them happy．As you know，I'm patient and I believe they will like me，too．If Iam given the chance，I will help all kinds of activities．Also，I will introduce some Chinese culture to them．At the same time，I can help the foreign kids tolearn some Chinese．Certainly，I will be good friends with them and we can write to each other sometimes．
I really want to join you，please give me the chance，thank you very much!I'm looking forward to your reply!



Yours，
Han Xue．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 I think I have the abilities to help them．我想我有能力幫助他們． 這是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，I think是主句，后面的是賓語(yǔ)從句．
   高分句型二
 If I am given the chance，I will help all kinds of activities．如果我有機(jī)會(huì)，我會(huì)幫助各種活動(dòng)．這是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句是一般將來時(shí)，從句用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
I'm so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in an International school．I hope I can join in it．【開頭點(diǎn)明主題】I think I have the abilities to help them【高分句型一，注意賓語(yǔ)從句的使用】．First I can speak Engliash very well and it is easy for me  to  communicate with kids．And I have a few hobbies，such as playing basketball and tennis．In addition，I can also dance and sing songs to make them happy．As you know，I'm patient and I believe they will like me，too．If I am given the chance，I will help all kinds of activities【高分句型二，注意if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．Also，I will introduce some Chinese culture to them．At the same time，I can help the foreign  kids tolearn some Chinese．Certainly，I will be good friends with them and we can write to each other sometimes．【正文部分詳細(xì)介紹自己】
I  really want to join you，please give me the chance，thank you very much!I am looking forward to your reply．【結(jié)尾緊扣主題】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．