Question

9．有些同學常因作弊而被通報批評，請針對這種不良行為結合下面圖片內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，在英語課上進行交流，并談談你的看法和建議．
注意：（1）文章必須包括圖片中的信息，可適當增加細節(jié)．
（2）分析作弊的原因，談談你的看法，提出建議，至少兩條．
（3）詞數(shù)：80～100．
（4）短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)．
短文首句：Nowadays some students were criticized because of cheat．
參考詞匯：批評 criticize作弊 cheat
In the picture，we can see some students copying the answers from others while some are doing by themselves．
They do like that because they want to get good grades with no effort．Meanwhile，some are under great pressure，so they are afraid of failing in the exam．We should realize that cheating in exams is bad for study，and the future is full of sharp competition and any success achieved by cheating won't last long．
In my opinion，we should study hard to get good grades．In addition，we should be an honest person at any time．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They do like that because they want to get good grades with no effort他們真的喜歡因為他們想要不通過努力獲得好成績．
because引導的原因狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
We should realize that cheating in exams is bad for study我們應該意識到考試作弊對學習不利．
realize后是that引導的賓語從句．

解答 Nowadays some students were criticized because of cheat．In the picture，we can see some students copying the answers from others while some are doing by themselves．（描述圖片）They do like that because they want to get good grades with no effort．【高分句型一】Meanwhile，some are under great pressure，so they are afraid of failing in the exam．（作弊的原因）We should realize that cheating in exams is bad for study，【高分句型二】and the future is full of sharp competition and any success achieved by cheating won't last long．
In my opinion，we should study hard to get good grades．In addition，we should be an honest person at any time．（看法，提出建議）

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