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14．Life is just like a mirror，you smile at it，and it smiles at you，too．請(qǐng)你以"Learn to Smile"為題，根據(jù)下表所列的要點(diǎn)寫一篇60詞以上的文章（文章開頭已給出）．

學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑	1、面對(duì)困難與煩惱學(xué)會(huì)微笑（考試失利、被別人誤解等）． 2、使你自信，擊敗你的人有時(shí)就是你自己． 3、有益于身心健康．
學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)他人微笑	1、便于與他人之間的交流． 2、給別人帶來快樂，自己也快樂．
微笑是一種語言	人人都能懂，傳遞友誼，拉近距離．

1．參考詞匯：誤解 misunderstand 自信confident 交流 communicate
2．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順．
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife，the first sentence of it is"Just a smile and the rain is gone．"Do you like smiling？I think you should learn to smile．
Doyoulikesmiling？Smileiscommoninourlives，butitisalsoveryimportanttousbecauseithasmagicpower．Ithinkweshouldlearntosmile．
First，learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life．If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends，don't be sad．Just smile at yourself．Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence．Sometimes the one who beats you is not others，but yourself．And smile can also keep you healthy．
Second，learn to smile at others．It will make you communicate better with people．Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well．
Third，Smiling at life is a style to live，is important to our development，makes us confident and be a happier life．
In a word，smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone．It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people．Living with a smile，every day will be shiny．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以Learn to Smile為題談?wù)剬W(xué)會(huì)微笑的意義．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱和第二人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑．面對(duì)困難與煩惱學(xué)會(huì)微笑（考試失利、被別人誤解等）．使你自信，擊敗你的人有時(shí)就是你自己．有益于身心健康．
2．學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)他人微笑．便于與他人之間的交流．給別人帶來快樂，自己也快樂．
3．微笑是一種語言．人人都能懂，傳遞友誼，拉近距離．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
smile at sb 對(duì)某人微笑
keep healthy 保持健康
make sb/sth+adj  讓…怎么樣
belong to 屬于
between …and…兩者之間
【高分句型】
1．If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends，don't be sad．
if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句．
2．Sometimes the one ①who beats you is not others，②but yourself．
①who是關(guān)系代詞，定語從句修飾先行詞the one．who作為從句的主語．
②but表示而是，與前面的not，構(gòu)成not…but …不是…而是…
3．①In a word，smile is a kind of language②belonging to everyone．
①in a word 總之
②動(dòng)名詞短語做后置定語，修飾前面的名詞language

解答 Learn to Smile
Do you like smiling？Smile is common in our lives，but it is also very important to us because it has magic power．I think we should learn to smile．
First，learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life．If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends，don't be sad．【高分句型】Just smile at yourself．Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence．Sometimes the one who beats you is not others，but yourself．【高分句型】And smile can also keep you healthy．（學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑）
Second，learn to smile at others．It will make you communicate better with people．Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well．（學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)自己微笑）
 Third，Smiling at life is a style to live，is important to our development，makes us confident and be a happier life．（學(xué)會(huì)對(duì)生活微笑）
In a word，smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone．【高分句型】It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people．Living with a smile，every day will be shiny．（微笑是一種語言）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文注意：
1．仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)．
2．提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，
   按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．
3．根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣．