Question

12．中學生學習時間長、壓力大，專家建議學生每天課后應采取適當?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约海�某英文�?學生習作"專欄正在就"學生適當?shù)姆潘煞绞?這一話題進行征文．假設(shè)你是二十二中初三（3）班的班長，最近你對班上同學課后放松方式進行了調(diào)查．請根據(jù)表格提供的調(diào)查信息和要求寫一篇短文向該報投稿．

對  象	二十二中初三（3）班
人  數(shù)	60人（男：31人；女：29人）
常用放松方式	1．看電視（30人） 2．玩電腦游戲（12人） 3．聽音樂（8人） 4．進行體育鍛煉（5人） 5．沒有時間放松（5人）
你的觀點	哪一種（些）放松方式是適當?shù)模?br />為什么？

注意：1．短文包括對調(diào)查相關(guān)信息的介紹和你自己的觀點；
2．詞數(shù)：80-100．題目和開頭已為你寫好，不記入總詞數(shù)．
The Poper Way（s） for Students to Relax
I am the monitor of Class3，Grade 3，No.22middle School．Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class．         

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax．
句中"doing sports is a good way"為賓語從句，"another five are too busy to relax．"使用了短語"too…to…太…而不能…"．這句話意為：五位同學認為做運動是一種好方法，但是另外五個太忙而無法放松．
高分句型二：
I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes．
句中"taking exercise is a proper way"為賓語從句，"because it can rest our brains and eyes．"為原因狀語從句．這句話意為：我認為做運動是一種適當?shù)姆潘煞绞�，因為它可以放松我們的大腦和眼睛．

解答 The Proper Ways for Students to Relax
  I am the monitor of Class 3，Grade3，No.22 Middle School．Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class．（點明主題）
  There are 60 students in my class（31 boys and 29 girls ）．Different students have different ways to relax．Half of the students often watch TV.12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax．【高分句型一】（調(diào)查結(jié)果）
  As  we study too long every day and suffer from too much pressure，every student should choose proper ways to relax．In my opinion，watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax．I think taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes．【高分句型二】Besides，It can help improve our health．Therefore，I often Play pingpong after class．It's really helpful to both my health and my study．（我的看法）

點評 寫作文時要注意平時語言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，寫作時注意條理清楚，語意通暢．