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17．據(jù)中國(guó)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)信息中心數(shù)據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)，中國(guó)網(wǎng)民中66%是青少年．人們對(duì)于學(xué)生上網(wǎng)持不同意見(jiàn)．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，同時(shí)發(fā)表自己個(gè)人的看法．

贊成的理由		反對(duì)的理由
1．廣交朋友，自由表達(dá)思想．		1．浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，影響健康．
2．了解更多背景信息，拓寬視野．		2．容易受騙，不利于學(xué)習(xí)．
3．…		3．…
個(gè)人看法	…

要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；
2）必須包括所有相關(guān)信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4）不得使用真實(shí)姓名和校名等．
It's reported that 66%of Chinese"netizens （網(wǎng)民）"are teenagers by the China Internet Network Information Centre．Different people have different opinions．
Some people say yes．The internet helps make many friends．Chatting on line，students can more freely express their feelings and opinions，and even get help with their foreign language studies．And some people said surfing on the Internet can learn more background information and open up their eyes．
Others，however，think students should not．They say making friends on line is a waste of time，which should be spent more meaningfully on study．Besides，some students get cheated on line．What's worse，it is bad for your health．It is my opinion that students should place their study，health and safety before other things．As for friendship，we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)自己的看法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1贊成的理由1）廣交朋友，自由表達(dá)思想；2）了解更多背景信息，拓寬視野 3）…
2反對(duì)的理由1）浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，影響健康；2）容易受騙，不利于學(xué)習(xí)；3）…
3你的看法
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
 make friends 交朋友
a waste of 浪費(fèi)
spend 時(shí)間 on sth  花時(shí)間做某事
get cheated 受騙
【高分句型】
1．Chatting on line，students can more freely express their feelings and opinions，and even get help with their foreign language studies．
Chatting on line動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做方式狀語(yǔ)．
2．They say ①making friends on line is a waste of time，②which should be spent more meaningfully on study．
①say后是省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句，動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)making friends on line做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)is．a(chǎn) waste of 浪費(fèi)
②which作為關(guān)系詞的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which 作為主語(yǔ)，修飾先行詞time．
3．It is my opinion that students should place their study，health and safety before other things．
it是形式主語(yǔ)，that從句作為真正主語(yǔ)，

解答 It's reported that 66%of Chinese"netizens （網(wǎng)民）"are teenagers by the China Internet Network Information Centre．Different people have different opinions．Some people say yes．The internet helps make many friends．Chatting on line，students can more freely express their feelings and opinions，and even get help with their foreign language studies．【高分句型】And some people said surfing on the Internet can learn more background information and open up their eyes．（贊成的理由）
Others，however，think students should not．They say making friends on line is a waste of time，which should be spent more meaningfully on study．【高分句型】So，it will get in the way of schoolwork．Besides，some students get cheated on line．What's worse，it is bad for health．（反對(duì)的理由）
It is my opinion that students should place their study，health and safety before other things．【高分句型】As for friendship，we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us．（我的看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)，并給出了作文的開(kāi)頭．我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說(shuō)出自己的觀點(diǎn)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)，要注意主謂一致等問(wèn)題．寫(xiě)作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．