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10．假如你叫大明，收到了你的英國朋友Tony的來信，信中他很關心四川雅安地震后學生的情況．請你根據(jù)他的來信內容寫一封回信，感謝他對災區(qū)學生的關心，回答他的問題，并談談你的感受．

提示詞語：thank you，care to，go on，government，offer，encourage，brave
Dear Daming，
I'm sorry to hear that a big earthquake happened in Ya'an，Sichuan．Some school buildings broke down in the earthquake and many students couldn't go to school．But I know the government is trying their best to help them．And Chinese people are so strong and brave that they aren't afraid of anything difficult．Can the students go on studying now？Please tell me more about them．
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours，
Tony

Dear Tony，
I'm glad to hear from you．Thank you so much for your care to the students in Ya'an，Sichuan．Yes，the students can go on studying now．It's true that many students couldn't go to school at that time．But as quickly as possible，the government helped them find new places to go on studying．And many people also offer them lots of help and encourage them to be strong and brave．I think they are not alone．China is a big family and love is just around them
Best wishes．YoursDaming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是給朋友寫一封回信，感謝他對災區(qū)學生的關心，回答他的問題，并談談你的感受．注意信件的格式．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時及一般過去時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
來信的大意是：我很抱歉聽到四川雅安發(fā)生大地震，一些學校建筑在地震中倒塌了，很多學生不能去上學了．但我知道政府盡力幫助他們．中國人是如此的堅強和勇敢，他們不怕任何困難．現(xiàn)在學生們能繼續(xù)學習了嗎？請告訴我更多關于他們的事情．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1感謝關心
2回答問題：現(xiàn)在學生們能繼續(xù)學習了嗎？
3其他更多信息．
4感受

常用到的重點短語：
thank you for  因為…感謝你
as…as possible 盡可能…
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
offer sb sth 提供某物給某人
encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵某人做某事
【高分句型】
1．It's true that many students couldn't go to school at that time．
it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．
2．But①as quickly as possible，the government②helped them find new places ③to go on studying．
①as…as possible 盡可能…
②help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
③動詞不定式做目的狀語．

解答 Dear Tony，
I'm very glad to hear from you．
Thank you so much for your care to the students in Ya'an，Sichuan．（感謝關心）Yes，the students can go on studying now．（回答問題）It's true that many students couldn't go to school at that time．【高分句型】But as quickly as possible，the government helped them find new places to go on studying．【高分句型】And many people also offer them lots of help and encourage them to be strong and brave．（更多信息--政府和熱心人幫忙）I think they are not alone．China is a big family and love is just around them．（感受）
Best wishes．

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)．