Question

假設你將代表初三畢業(yè)生在畢業(yè)典禮上發(fā)言，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。
要點如下：

回顧	校園很美麗；每學期有豐富多彩的活動，例如，去年地震過后，學校組織了捐款活動；老師教學生動有趣；三年來學到很多，進步大。
感謝	老師的培養(yǎng)，父母的支持，同學的幫助
祝愿	我希望……

1. 發(fā)言稿須包括所有內容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；
2. 最后一個要點適當發(fā)揮1~2句；
3. 詞數80個左右，發(fā)言稿的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Good afternoon, everyone! It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2012. _______________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Our school is very beautiful. We have colorful activities every term. For example, our school made a donation after the earthquake last year. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years. We should thank our teachers for their teaching, our parents for their support, and our classmates for their help. I hope our school will be more beautiful and everyone will have a good time here.

這篇書面表達是根據要點來寫的，所以主要把要點都表達出來，注意單詞拼寫正確，語法沒有問題，適當使用恰當的句型。前面的回顧和感謝主要是結合要點進行闡述，最后的祝愿是學生根據自己的情況進行發(fā)揮，表現學生發(fā)散思維的能力。寫作時注意不同時態(tài)的運用，例如回顧階段，主要是過去時，表示感謝時主要用一般現在時，祝愿當然用一般將來時了。在范文中，一些詞組和句型的運用值得學習，made a donation “捐贈”make their lessons lively and interesting“使課堂生動有趣” made great progress“取得很大的進步” We should thank our teachers for their teaching, our parents for their support, and our classmates for their help.這句話用的是排比的關系。