Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

中考結(jié)束后，你將告別熟悉的校園，三年的初中生活也許會成為你一生永恒的記憶。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示及要求，寫篇短文回顧你的校園生活。

提示詞：classmates and friends ,teacher, subjects, school activities.

要求：1.短文需包含以上所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整。

3.文中不能出現(xiàn)本人的真實信息。

4.字?jǐn)?shù)要求在80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Three years’ school life

I’m a student in Grade Nine. I will leave my junior high school after I finish the exam. ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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In a few months I have to say goodbye to my school. I feel sad about it .I love my school and all my teachers. I’ll never forget my three years’ school life.

Answer 1

【答案】

Three Years’ School Life

I’m a student in Grade Nine. I will leave my junior middle school next month after I finish the exam. I’m feeling a bit nervous and excited. I study in a middle school. It is big and nice. There are many students and teachers in it. I get on well with my classmates. We often help each other. We study many subjects at school. I like English and P.E. best. We often do sports in the afternoon after class. Of course, we all spend much time on study. We work very hard. Our teachers are quite friendly to us. They are also very helpful. We can ask them for help at any time. We go on a school trip each term and we really enjoy it.

In a few days, I have to say goodbye to my school. I feel sorry about it. I love my school and all my teachers. I will never forget my three years’ school life.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹自己的三年初中生活，可以從同學(xué)，老師，之間的關(guān)系，自己的學(xué)校生活，及畢業(yè)之際的感悟入手描述。

寫作亮點：這篇短文內(nèi)容涵蓋了題目要求的所有要點，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯。在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)組織上很好地使用了一般現(xiàn)在時，文章脈絡(luò)清晰，自然流暢。