Question

9．生活中每個人都有與他人溝通交流的體驗，如：與家人、朋友等．請根據(jù)下面的要求寫一篇不少于80詞的短文（文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名）．
要求：
1．表達你對溝通的理解；
2．描述自身經(jīng)歷或社會現(xiàn)象中在溝通方面存在的問題；
3．參考下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，提出至少一點更好地與人溝通的辦法．

Communication is a basic ability to get on well with others．It play an important role in our daily life．
When friends are eating dinner together，most of them just surf the Internet on the phone without any communication．
They may feel bored to that they won't get together any more．In addition，some students always get into trouble with others，so they have no friends and so on．All these problems are caused by lack of communication．
In my opinion，if they learn to talk with others more，share ideas and feelings with others or be a good listener sometimes，they will communicate better with each other．The better you communicate with others，the more friends you will have．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勆�活中溝通方面的問題和與人溝通的方法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．表達你對溝通的理解；
2．描述自身經(jīng)歷或社會現(xiàn)象中在溝通方面存在的問題；
3．提出更好地與人溝通的辦法（至少一點））
常用到的重點短語：
get on with sb 與某人相處
not…any more 不再
in addition 另外
the+比較級，the+比較級  越…，就越…
【高分句型】
1．①When friends are eating dinner together，most of them just surf the Internet on the phone ②without any communication．
①when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
②without介詞，沒有…
2．①In my opinion，②if they learn to talk with others more，share ideas and feelings with others or be a good listener sometimes，they will communicate better with each other．
①In my opinion依我看來，插入語，提出自己的觀點．
②if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句，主將從現(xiàn)．
3．The better you communicate with others，the more friends you will have．
the+形容詞或副詞比較級，the+比較級，常表示"越…，就越…"，是一個復(fù)合句，其中前面的句子是狀語從句，后面的句子是主句．

解答 Communication is a basic ability to get on well with others．It play an important role in our daily life． （對溝通的理解）
    When friends are eating dinner together，most of them just surf the Internet on the phone without any communication．【高分句型】
   They may feel bored to that they won't get together any more．In addition，some students always get into trouble with others，so they have no friends and so on．All these problems are caused by lack of communication．（社會現(xiàn)象中在溝通方面存在的問題）
   In my opinion，if they learn to talk with others more，share ideas and feelings with others or be a good listener sometimes，they will communicate better with each other．【高分句型】The better you communicate with others，the more friends you will have．【高分句型】（提出更好地與人溝通的辦法）

點評 圖表類作文寫作之前考生首先要認真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時的英語學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．